At 12:15

As I approached, he frowned, recognising the crumpled note I held in my hand.  How could I tell him, she wasn’t coming?

– ⋅ o ♥ o ⋅ –

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  1. I love this! Beautiful, poignant, and – of course – concise.

    I’m going to struggle with this particular Writing101 challenge for sure…’concise’ writing is not my bag 😉

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